Hear My Words

April 14, 2013
By Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven


Hear my words
For they are sworn.
Especially the hearts
that have been torn.
Hear my words
they are crystal clear.
Light is fading and
darkness is near.
Hear my words
like the mighty trumpet sound.
They rumble like thunder
And cannot be found.
Hear my words
they've more power then Zeus
bound by time
And cannot come loose
Hear my words
Like a hang mans knot
Through raging battles
they have fought.
Hear my words
Life is beautiful
Your one in a million,
a golden soul.
Hear my words
your the best around
So graceful and cunning
And most profound.
Hear my words
You'll make them roar
fly higher then eagles
And then some more
Hear my words
your one of a kind
like a diamond in the rough
Your hard to find.


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on Jun. 17 2014 at 5:37 pm
DreamersJourney SILVER, Old Massett, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The best thing you can do is the right thing, the next best thing you can do is the wrong thing. The worst thing you can do is nothing."
"Decide to have an attitude of gratitude, you can become bitter or better."
"beYOUtiful, everyone else is taken."

Love it! very compelling.

on Jun. 8 2013 at 3:26 pm
I really enjoyed this! Great job!

Jdaniel BRONZE said...
on May. 9 2013 at 4:22 pm
Jdaniel BRONZE, Waterford, Virginia
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really good could have used some longer pause between rhyming parts but still great all around

on Apr. 30 2013 at 2:17 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

thanks and, will do  

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2013 at 6:45 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
1 article 0 photos 406 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

the flow was awesome. honestly, the only thing i have to say was that the ending was a bit abrupt. loved it tho. Check out some of mine?




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