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Hear my words
For they are sworn.
Especially the hearts
that have been torn.
Hear my words
they are crystal clear.
Light is fading and
darkness is near.
Hear my words
like the mighty trumpet sound.
They rumble like thunder
And cannot be found.
Hear my words
they've more power then Zeus
bound by time
And cannot come loose
Hear my words
Like a hang mans knot
Through raging battles
they have fought.
Hear my words
Life is beautiful
Your one in a million,
a golden soul.
Hear my words
your the best around
So graceful and cunning
And most profound.
Hear my words
You'll make them roar
fly higher then eagles
And then some more
Hear my words
your one of a kind
like a diamond in the rough
Your hard to find.

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Nightmaresalive said...
today at 5:37 pm:
Love it! very compelling.
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olivejuiceolivia said...
Jun. 8, 2013 at 3:26 pm:
I really enjoyed this! Great job!
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Jdaniel said...
May 9, 2013 at 4:22 pm:
really good could have used some longer pause between rhyming parts but still great all around
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Bluetooth13 said...
Apr. 30, 2013 at 2:17 pm:
thanks and, will do  
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sarah98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 25, 2013 at 6:45 pm:
the flow was awesome. honestly, the only thing i have to say was that the ending was a bit abrupt. loved it tho. Check out some of mine?
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