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April 15, 2013
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i am here

i have always been around,here

the clouds are blue;

hibiscus been red,

i have seen it all.

but still i have me within
the love and affection.
i slowly bleed
you are not here.

GET to know my heart turned flaccid
it did in a world of your own paranormal intrinsic nature,
i need you beside me.

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JettaWintryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 29, 2013 at 9:17 am
WOW. Very, very strong. Very captivating. Your word choice towards the end is very nice!! Maybe add some of those words nearer to the top. WOW. Very nice. It's opaque; I love that. I love how you can't ever exactly know what's going on, and the poem means something completely different to each reader. This is the type of poem that is relatable to anyone - anyone at all. This is the type of poem publishers are looking for. Nice job.
chriskabz replied...
Apr. 30, 2013 at 10:36 am
thanx alot. it means alot for a beginner like me
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