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Just a worn down pair of jeans,
Dark blue at the waist,
Torn at the knees

Having no meaning,
Having no heart,
Lost in a gust of cold wind

A tall hollow tree,
Rough and blank,
Chilling inside

Having no meaning,
Having no heart,
Lost in a cold gust of wind

Rackety old cabin,
Musty sent inside,
Wood peeling off the sides


Having no meaning,
Having no heart,
Lost in a cold gust of wind

Feeling of being,
Torn in half



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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 10, 2013 at 9:39 pm:
Love this poem; you already know why. The emotion is overpowering and its what anyone can relate to.... It deserved to be in the showcase. Love the repetition and ending. Great Job!!
 
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