Torn.

April 11, 2013
By Alex_Writer GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
Alex_Writer GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
18 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the long run, we shape our lives, and we shape ourselves. The process never ends until we die. And the choices we make are ultimately our own responsibility." ~Eleanor Roosevelt


Just a worn down pair of jeans,
Dark blue at the waist,
Torn at the knees

Having no meaning,
Having no heart,
Lost in a gust of cold wind

A tall hollow tree,
Rough and blank,
Chilling inside

Having no meaning,
Having no heart,
Lost in a cold gust of wind

Rackety old cabin,
Musty sent inside,
Wood peeling off the sides


Having no meaning,
Having no heart,
Lost in a cold gust of wind

Feeling of being,
Torn in half


The author's comments:
Explains it by itself.

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Hanban12 ELITE said...
on May. 10 2013 at 9:39 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Love this poem; you already know why. The emotion is overpowering and its what anyone can relate to.... It deserved to be in the showcase. Love the repetition and ending. Great Job!!


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