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I Surrender

April 9, 2013
By AbbaDabbaDoo PLATINUM, Mountain Grove, Missouri
AbbaDabbaDoo PLATINUM, Mountain Grove, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Some folks are wise and some are otherwise. I guess we know which one you are.


I surrender. I give up.
Life is just too hard.
They say we can get back up, but the wind is blowing too fiercely to move even a finger.
It buffets and pushes and pulls and hurts.
My heart is a mess, my soul is ripped.
A scar adorns my cheek.
I surrender. I give up.


The author's comments:
This is about any girl or boy or man or woman who gives up. I hope I captured the beauty and sorrow of depression in this.

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