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I Take Back My Tears This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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I take back my tears
the wasted years
I spent crying
for what never could happen

I take back my heart
my shattered heart
Up off the ground
and back in my arms

I take back my hope
wasted on you
and toss it aside
for it has no meaning now

Nothing you say
no words
no songs
can heal the bleeding wound
That you opened again and again

I walk a free woman
held by nothing of yours
and fly away free
as free as the wind

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Moonbeam13 said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 5:50 am
I love this poem, it's heavy.........:) Could you maybe look at poems and comment? Peace:)
 
toflyaway said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 2:36 am
This piece is so beautifully written.
 
Aishwarya S. said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 1:53 am
its beautiful...love it..
 
coco_babe said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:06 am
this is an amazing and empowering peice :)
 
katielynn21 said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 5:37 pm
I relate to this a lot. it's very well written. check out my work sometime.:)
 
raychell.faith said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 9:43 pm
this is wonderful because it's both empowering and soft, which is not an easy thing to do... to create a piece that shows emotion as well as strength beautiful... <3.
 
Ally25 said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 5:10 pm
I realy liked it...Keep writing.
 
decembersun14 said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 4:46 pm
This was really deep. i love how you used that picture with it
 
CutieKaity said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 3:26 pm
this is absolutely amazing, keep up the good work =)
 
magic-esi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 2:43 pm
I love this poem! I wish I could give you constructive criticism but nothing I could say could make this poem better than it already is. It's very good and exceptionally inspirational.
 
FLAT5LIF3 said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 2:33 pm
I LOV3 TI5 IT5 GR3AT
 
ShAtTeReD_dReAmS said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 2:18 pm
its good i like the meaning left in it
 
dasmoda said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 2:07 pm
this isn't very poetic, but i love the organization of the words and the pain in the story
 
Kaleskat said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 8:28 am
this is amazing! This describes how I have been feeling! Keep on writing! :) Your amazing at it.
 
Energy233 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 9:02 pm
This is great.
 
Rissy15 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 7:38 pm
Yes, absouloutley amazing! And it's alot how i write I love free verse. Check out mine. THANKS!
 
Paintbrush said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 5:46 pm
I love it its really good
 
S1234 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 5:27 pm
Great work!! I can definitely relate to this, and so many other people can. Very well written!
Comment and rate my work if you get teh chance!
 
Anjo! said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 4:23 pm
YA!! this is sooo amazing, i love how you write. its kinda like how i write too. and this puts a smile on my face. Go woman! haha. keep writing, express those inner demons!
 
SilverCowgirl said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 3:45 pm
i loved this.. describes perfectly how i've felt lately
 
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