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I Take Back My Tears MAG

September 5, 2008
By Lilyan Howard BRONZE, Tallahasee, Florida
Lilyan Howard BRONZE, Tallahasee, Florida
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I take back my tears
the wasted years
I spent crying
for what never could happen

I take back my heart
my shattered heart
Up off the ground
and back in my arms

I take back my hope
wasted on you
and toss it aside
for it has no meaning now

Nothing you say
no words
no songs
can heal the bleeding wound
That you opened again and again

I walk a free woman
held by nothing of yours
and fly away free
as free as the wind



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on Mar. 17 2011 at 6:41 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

good for you! can you bottle up some of that happy free spirit for mee?

on Mar. 17 2011 at 4:08 pm
HipsterUnicorn. BRONZE, Pendleton, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Movement."

I really like it:) It's very inspirational.

on Mar. 17 2011 at 2:34 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

I Agree. Amazing poem.

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on Mar. 17 2011 at 2:33 pm
Pickles-29, Boise, Idaho
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great job!!!!!!!!!!!!1

on Mar. 17 2011 at 1:18 pm
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to burn out than to fade away..." -Kurt Cobain

I like the independent tone! Makes me feel strong and confident

on Mar. 17 2011 at 1:16 pm
to.hold.the.sun SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"You spend your whole life stuck in the labyrinth, thinking about how you'll escape it one day, and how awesome it will be, and imagining that future keeps you going, but you never do it. You just use the future to escape the present." -John Green

This is inspiring. You gave me goosebumps.

BBALL101 said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 1:04 pm
BBALL101, Rockford, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"friends are like stars,you cant always see them...but they're there."

r u Athena willams? lol

BBALL101 said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 1:04 pm
BBALL101, Rockford, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"friends are like stars,you cant always see them...but they're there."

i couldnt agree more:) it was great.

on Mar. 17 2011 at 12:34 pm
BitterSweet1993 SILVER, Bronx, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Love is only a dirty trick played on us to achieve continuation of the species. ~W. Somerset Maugham, A Writer's Notebook, 1949

You have done a wonderful job if voicing what so many people should. The art of getting up and moving over the pain into happier days. Beautifully written.

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on Mar. 17 2011 at 12:00 pm
reesha SILVER, Rawalpindi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them."
Walt Disney

"Hakuna Matata!"
Lion King

"The British policy was 'unite and conquer'. But I say 'unite and conquer'."
Greg Mortenson (Three Cups of Tea)

Beautifully written <3

darkangel95 said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 10:07 am
thats kool

on Mar. 17 2011 at 9:38 am
JesBabes BRONZE, Ridgewood, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
I'd Rather Hurt Than Feel Nothing At All....!

Your poem really touches my heart!! I love it so much!!

Athena95 GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 9:07 am
Athena95 GOLD, Auburn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If we stopped wondering we might just relax

this is Awesome

GoldSage said...
on Feb. 23 2011 at 7:36 pm
That is really awesome. That could easily speak to many heart. Keep writing.

on Feb. 23 2011 at 6:17 pm
CassidyMarturana BRONZE, Califon, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about just waiting out the storm. It's about learning to dance in the rain."

Amazingnesssss! Love this poem! :)

on Feb. 23 2011 at 5:19 pm
cheyenne1997 BRONZE, Chapin, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If life hands u free lemons.....keep them i mean hey free lemons!!!- Facebook user

awsomely amazing..it would make a great song

on Feb. 23 2011 at 3:00 pm
thinkofsomethingbetter GOLD, Tallmadge, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
in short, being vegen just makes you better then everyone else.
- scott pilgrim vs the world. best movie ever!

this is ahhhmazing(: how long have you been writing? please check out some of my stuff

on Feb. 23 2011 at 2:29 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

I LOVE this poem!!!  It completely relates to my situations in life.  Keep up the GREAT work!!!

on Feb. 23 2011 at 12:11 pm
oliviahatesalicia BRONZE, Elgin, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"A girl must be two things; classy & fabulous." -Coco Chanel

This poem is so relatable to soo many girls out there.  We've all wasted our time on something..especially love, which I think this is about.  This poem is very inspirational for people out there.

on Feb. 23 2011 at 12:09 pm
wavedancer BRONZE, Streamwood, Illinois
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I applaud the emotion you put into this poem. You let the reader get a sense of what you felt during a certain time and it is inviting for people who may feel the same. I think your choice of free verse was the best choice because it allowed the poem to flow naturally without trying to stay in a set of rules of other structured poems. Good Job.!