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My favorite moment
Is when you first wake up
That one perfect moment
When you don't remember anything
And for once you feel happy
For that one moment you are fine

Then the weigh of the world
slams you down
Knocking the breath out of you
Bringing back the pain
Bringing back reality
The one you tried to escape by sleeping

You can't hide forever
But you still try
Reality catches up with you
And eats you alive

That moment when
You first wake up
I look forward to everyday
For in that moment
You are happy
You are fine




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ItsJustVThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 20 at 3:32 pm:
This is great, and extremely true. The only grammar error that I noticed is you said weigh instead of weight. Other than that, good job!
 
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PetraWiggin said...
Apr. 16 at 11:09 pm:
OMG!!! i totally can relate to this. and its such a beautiful poem! i love your work
 
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