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Knew not

I can't lose another one
are road; are journey can not be done
this can't be it
this won't be the end
I just can't lose another friend
I had a premonition of that life i was missin
The life you were missing in
Where I did not smile Nor did I grin
I don't remember the reason why you got rid
I did not have a clue
I knew not what I did



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IrenieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 4, 2013 at 2:28 am:
Not your best poem. You misspelled "our" as "are" and the theme was a little muddled. Keep trying!
 
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drumsrawesome said...
Apr. 26, 2013 at 8:01 pm:
"Our." I  believe you're confusing "are" with "our." Seems like a deep poem though.
 
Mr.Right replied...
Apr. 28, 2013 at 2:17 pm :
Thanks,And conventions was never really "My thing" but im happy you like it :)
 
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