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Step into the waves at high tide
Let the water flow
Feel it glide
Duck into the salt and foam
Enter inside

Hear the ocean roar
Swim in and let your heart soar
You've never felt so strongly before
You're not numb anymore

Let nature's beauty past your defenses
Keep this in your memory, use all senses
In the ocean's breeze feel yourself become
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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 4:06 pm:
I love the ocean though I don't get to go there as often as I'd like. Great detail. This poem is picturesque. and the last stanza is the best.
 
marvelgirl5396 replied...
today at 6:38 pm :
Thank you, this poem is one that I wrote a while ago but the last stanze is my favorite too.
 
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