Only You MAG

August 31, 2008
By staticburn SILVER, Clearwater, Florida
staticburn SILVER, Clearwater, Florida
5 articles 2 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hell is empty and all the devils are here - Shakespeare


It’s only you
Ever you
Who brings me close
To believing I’m
Something more than a
Promise and bones wrapped together with
Skin and whispers
It’s only you
Who keeps me
And makes me
Strong
And happy
With whom I’ve become
It’s only you
Ever you
With my heart tied
To a telephone line
I breathe
And
Release everything
That’s
Everything
To me
Because it’s only you
Ever you
Who I need
When I can’t
Make it on
My
Own.


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2brownI BRONZE said...
on Nov. 4 2015 at 9:58 am
2brownI BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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agree with this poem because I felt as if it was so strong. It’s strong to me because it’s a love poem, and nothing is stronger than love. “With my heart tied,” this line is the strongest line in the poem to me, because when your in love your heart is really tied up.

on Jun. 27 2013 at 4:40 pm
You used great imagery to help us paint a picture when you said "promise and bones...skin and whispers." The way you formatted this poem definitely made it more effective along with the repetition "only you ever you" It flows gracefully. It was very easy to relate, I love it!

on Nov. 14 2011 at 7:55 am
forever-and-always GOLD, Auburn, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
hearts on fire minds on ice. - Terry Fisher

i really love this.it says it all.

on Nov. 14 2011 at 7:54 am
forever-and-always GOLD, Auburn, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
hearts on fire minds on ice. - Terry Fisher

i really love this.it says it all.

HillaryJo said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 4:29 pm
HillaryJo, Anderson, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments
I loved this a lot! It really reminded me of my relationship with Jesus. I have been in church my whole life but just recently have I begun to follow Him with my whole heart. I love my Savior! He is my everything!

spency SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:14 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

5/5 good jb...visit me

on Nov. 12 2010 at 4:27 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

awwww wow this is amazzingggg. so deep and sweet. i can  relate so well. i luvv it please keep writingg

on Aug. 9 2010 at 10:01 am
Homskllet SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments
That was awesome.

on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:43 pm
ItsaFunnyThing BRONZE, Rolling Hills Estates, California
1 article 1 photo 5 comments
super cute :)

JessieB SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 2:41 pm
JessieB SILVER, Elkton, Maryland
7 articles 1 photo 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
an eye for an eye, and the whole world goes blind~Ghandi

i really like this(:

on Mar. 8 2010 at 8:46 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 50 comments
i loved that....great job!!! very heart warming!!!

on Jan. 23 2010 at 8:12 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
71 articles 2 photos 180 comments
uber cute :)

on Jan. 23 2010 at 3:05 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

this is beautiful. keep on writing

on Jan. 1 2010 at 12:04 am
Thethingiseek BRONZE, N Las Vegas, Nevada
2 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"May we continue not to judge man by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character."- by
"The day we stopped fighting for eachother is the day we lost our humanity"-2012 movie
"No man is equivalent to the person next to him."me

This is what I'll want to say in the future at my wedding for my vows. It..(I'm tearing up) beautiful

on May. 28 2009 at 11:43 am
JasonsBaby GOLD, Spencer, West Virginia
11 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
when i get mad i tend to tell people to "go suck a fart"

i loved that,it was so heart felt.


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