As the World Goes On

March 26, 2013
By Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas


On days like these, I like to see the world blurry.
Where all the colors smudge, revealing a dirty canvas.
It reminds me that we are all just numbers responsible for turning the broken hands of time.
We are just clumps of wet snow that melts persistently on a dark, wet sidewalk.
We are nothing special.
Just shards of glass, scattered about a dusty floor.
With hearts that have been wrenched from cold bodies.
And all the love in the world has resigned back to its cold, black box.
We are just figurines.
We are just furniture.
We are just place holders and book marks for something more.
And while we sit idle by
Glinting in the streetlight
Hiding in the shadows
Being "just"
The world goes on.
But please someone tell me who put us in charge of turning this planet, because I don't see how it happened.
We are nothing special.
And still the world goes on.
And we rise
And we eat
And we rest
A never ending cycle of bore.
And the world does go on.



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on Jun. 15 2013 at 8:37 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

I like the idea behind the "We are nothing special." I love your imagery in here as well. Amazing job on a creative topic! :D Have a nice day!

on Jun. 15 2013 at 1:04 pm
GraphicWriter DIAMOND, Yuba City, California
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Ah yes, the boring, normal nomad human life. You've taken normal boring words, and used them to somehow leave a want of excitement in this. A hint of mystery. Lovely. And the desperation hidden underneath makes it just that much more enjoyable.

on May. 30 2013 at 3:37 pm
cayaTW PLATINUM, Yuma, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Those who forget history will often repeat it

My favorite part about this work is the descriptive language and bold statements. I liked how you described us very angrily.

on May. 4 2013 at 2:42 pm
jmitchbb SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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I love this poem! My favorite lines are: It reminds me that we are all/just numbers responsible for/ turning the broken hands of time. Great job!

on May. 3 2013 at 4:32 pm
Firefaerie SILVER, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not pity the dead. pity the living, and above all, those who live without love" - J.K Rowling
"There's always another secret" -Brandon Sanderson

i like how you make everybody equal, and the way we can do things without really making progress  

on Apr. 23 2013 at 6:39 am
Cutey-Beauty SILVER, Ulaanbaator, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Soli Deo Gloria.

I used to wonder what it would be like if the world just...stopped. Without me. This poem really reminded me of that as well as a sense of purposelessness. What I used to be like at a younger age. So beautiful in  a tragic, gloomy way. :)

migwam ELITE said...
on Apr. 22 2013 at 6:01 pm
migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Never let the future disturb you. You will meet it, if you have to, with the same weapons of reason which today arm you against the present." --Marcus Aurelius

Though the tone of this poem is intentionally dull and gloomy, a restless spirit seems to glint from between its folds, discontent with this purposelessness. It's haunting, true, and absolutely beautiful.

on Apr. 16 2013 at 11:00 am
E.J.Mathews GOLD, International Falls, Minnesota
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I really liked this poem! It had a ton of imagery, and asked some really good questions. Great job!

on Apr. 14 2013 at 10:06 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

And* not but

on Apr. 14 2013 at 10:04 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

This poem was good :) yes, no matter what happens, the world doesn't stop and wait for anyone... Life goes on! And yes, we are all just figurines but furnitures, but we are billions of them! Think of the difference that we can make (for better or for worse) in this world! Good changes (peace, equality) are a long way to go, but don't give up hope! I really liked this poem :)

on Apr. 9 2013 at 7:18 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Impossible is not a word, it's just a reason for someone not to try.

Great poem very creative. 5 stars

on Apr. 8 2013 at 7:55 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

hmmm. I liked this, but i think i'm too stupid to get it :P anywaaaaayz, i DO know that your style was good and the rhythm was flawless, so you're good in my book!! :) :)

on Apr. 7 2013 at 4:20 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

Great poem, but I believe that you a make an awesome essay about this topic.  This poem is really philosophical, it makes you think, about us human beings, it reminds of a piece i'm writing about Americans

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on Apr. 5 2013 at 4:36 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

This is AMAZING. I love all of the metaphors and creative phrases. it was so good; I read it over and over again :)

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 5 2013 at 1:15 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

The title reminds me of As the World Turns. Great poem with a haunting yet true message. This is an amazing piece. Awesome work!

on Apr. 4 2013 at 7:10 pm
7_Ambitions GOLD, Bronx, New York
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This was simply, amazing , i loved it , and read it over and over again , beautifull , wish my writing was like this.

on Apr. 4 2013 at 6:22 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Oh my! This is so amazing. This is probably my favorite piece of yours. This line, 'It reminds me that we are all just numbers responsible for turning the broken hands of time.' is PRICELESS. I love this more than I can put into words!

on Apr. 4 2013 at 1:04 pm
Literature_Darling GOLD, Warrenton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"To live is the rarest thing of all. Most people exsist and that is all." ~Oscar Wilde
"I am a writer quite by accident, the way one my fall and rip a hole in their jeans." ~Blogger H. B. Sachs

This is by far my favorite of all the work I have read of yours! Perfect expression and great line breaks! I loved every aspect


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