March 26, 2013
By THE.REBEL.REBORN PLATINUM, Prentiss, Mississippi
THE.REBEL.REBORN PLATINUM, Prentiss, Mississippi
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The breakdown

living the lies of the world while at
The same time searching for the truth of it all leaving
No stone Unturned yet still it’s not enough to break
The chain and escape the inevitable haunting of my
Past and now I am to stand and a sure and lasting defeat.
Forced into submission by the constant heartache that she’s gone
Forever along with the fading memories of all that I held dear.
Soon this unsightly blight will drive my wrecked soul closer to the brink
Of Oblivion becomes clear as day and in the end the
Urge to jump shines vibrantly true.
Then will the luxury of death become so relevantly blissful and I am
Liberated from the pain of living without the one I love.

The author's comments:
this selection symbolizes the raw emotions felt when betrayed by some one who supposedly loved you

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on Dec. 13 2014 at 1:02 pm
THE.REBEL.REBORN PLATINUM, Prentiss, Mississippi
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thank you so much for reading

-Mavis- BRONZE said...
on Nov. 27 2014 at 9:13 pm
-Mavis- BRONZE, Hilo, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"pretty words are worth being cynical over, for they are just baits to be caught in the moment." -mavi

"What exactly would change if I cried, wanted revenge, was consumed by hatred, or went insane with rage?" -Yoshino

"I am your shadow. Worry not for if your light is dim, I will become darker so that you can become more defined.“ -mavi

"We create beautiful things to mask what we destroyed in order to create such.” -mavi

This is great- Very creative diction. Keep Writing. 


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