Change

March 25, 2013
By Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu


A change for the better
Sometimes we hurt
Sometimes we don’t
Sometimes we get caught in the wild fire and get burnt
Sometimes we are alright and we float
But we can always make ourselves better
Take a look at yourself
And notice all the good things you have
And then take a look around and notice the people that save
Everything to get just a slice of what you got
Because to them you got a lot
We can always better ourselves
On so many different levels
And in different ways
Just look in the mirror
There is always one near
And just ask yourself
What can I do better than everyone else
Give yourself a make over
And erase the cover
You have hidden behind
Let yourself shine



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on May. 22 2013 at 2:00 pm
Court901 BRONZE, Magnolia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagniation is not a talent of some people, but it is the health of every person" -Ralph Waldo Emerson

Good poem. It inspired me to write about change and change myself as well. I agree with LexusMarie about the sentence part. But other than that, good job.

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on May. 13 2013 at 6:31 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

I love this concept. You make rhyming seem so effortless as well and love the imagery. You're such an awesome writer! :P

on May. 13 2013 at 6:12 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hey there! I like the title, change is always a good topic to write about, in my opinion.. which reminds me, I should write about it soon. Anyways, I have a small suggestion, maybe put some of these lines together. For example, sometimes we hurt and sometimes we don't could be put together and separated by either a comma or period. I like the word choices in here, you have very good points. I loved the ending, it really eased the whole mood of the poem. Good job.


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