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She's Loving, He's Lying

She's loving


He's lying
She's smiling


He's faking
She's calling


He's ignoring
She's worried


He's caking
She's thinking


He's touching
She's sleeping


He's pleasuring
She's waking


He's thinking
She's contemplating


He's calling
She's answering


He's telling
She's crying


He's not caring
She's hurting


He's laughing
She's dying


He's living



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BriannaBella said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 7:52 pm:
Wow! that is sad. but i love it
 
AmandaPaige_12 replied...
Apr. 5, 2013 at 5:32 pm :
Thank You!!
 
 
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MRSMILINGKUSH said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 1:50 pm:
GOOD JOB AMANDA. NOM NOM NOM NOM BABIES. XD MR. KUSH aka david  
 
AmandaPaige_12 replied...
Apr. 5, 2013 at 5:33 pm :
Thanks Davvvvvvvvviiiiiiiddddd!! haha
 
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softballbabe2014 said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 1:48 pm:
I'm putting your poem in my English 3 poetry presentation(: I will mention your name, I love it!
 
AmandaPaige_12 replied...
Apr. 5, 2013 at 5:34 pm :
Thanks so much girl!!! :)
 
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iMusicMonstrosityThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 1:49 am:
I love this poem! It's a simple, yet meaningful way to write! :) I should try it sometime. :P Your poem is very beautiful. :)
 
AmandaPaige_12 replied...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 10:09 am :
Thank you! :) Im glad that you like it!
 
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