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Sticks And Stones

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I told you,
that nothing matters but you.
And you said,
that our love wasn't true.
A break down,
tears stinging my eyes.
And Im confused,
mind filled with all of your lies.
I stop,
and think of what I have done.
Try to think who's wrong,
but your the only one.
Its not my fault,
I gave you all.
Of my love you through away,
now you make me fall.
My wasted time,
Im so confused,
mentally abused,
being controlled by you.
Just like that riddle,
of sticks and stones.
But these are the words,
that broke my bones.
The ones in my mind,
Your words hurt more.
Because I thought I loved you,
but I don't anymore.



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WickedWriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 7:00 pm:
I was a little confused in the beginning. I mean i understood where you were going with it but the wording was sort of choppy. Love the line about the words that broke bones! All in all, a really nice piece! keep writing
 
lexi.smith13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 7:22 pm :
Read some of my other poems(:
 
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