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Before saying good-bye,





Please say you love me
I know I won’t see you ever, yet I love you without end





I cant face the reality




I am building my sympathy




Because I cant see you never




My love for you was forever



But why we cant be each others


I don’t know, possibly you don’t love me



Possibly I don’t belong with you


That’s why you didn’t sleep with me
I love you but I want more to say


So before leaving the door,
Please say you love like I do
I know I would be fake, if you say

It will be so easy to give,
My heart before you leave
So, now you know how deeper I love you
Good-bye my heart given love
I wont be seeing you with my heart full of love



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BrittyBrit said...
May 5, 2013 at 11:17 am:
BEAUTIFUL... very nice
 
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LiraDaeris said...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 1:36 am:
This one was alright. It conveys a very real emotion and pretty well, but I think you could do more with it. There is more to love than just sleeping together, so show her you wanted her to give you her heart still even though she is rejecting you.
 
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Hamza Waseem said...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 3:41 am:
nice work. 4.5/5
 
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Stein said...
Apr. 8, 2013 at 2:02 am:
pretty... im not really much for poetry, but this is a little interesting.
 
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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 7, 2013 at 11:12 am:
Beautiful! Its amazing yet sad.... great!
 
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Sunny225This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 2, 2013 at 11:35 am:
i love it ....!!!  
 
SunballSunnyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 19, 2013 at 12:22 pm :
like i said b4 .... i love it....!!!
 
SunballSunnyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 19, 2013 at 12:23 pm :
but sometimes its the other way around...... trust me i know.....
 
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Shadow_FoxThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 2, 2013 at 11:34 am:
aww this is bitter sweet i like it
 
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