Summer MAG

March 24, 2013
By StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro


Sunlight is dogmatic
Stubbornly insisting
On the optimistic rosy tint
That stings skin at the beach



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OldYoungOne said...
on Aug. 12 2013 at 12:59 pm
Well seeing as I am of African American/ Indian descent I can only imagine the horror. But nonetheless I like it all the same. Congrats.

on May. 27 2013 at 11:17 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

Dear Star,, Only half as sweet as you :D

on May. 25 2013 at 11:44 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
56 articles 0 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

Thanks a ton! I'm glad you liked it! :)

on May. 25 2013 at 11:43 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
56 articles 0 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

Haha thanks so much! :) You are so sweet^.^

on May. 25 2013 at 4:29 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

Oh Star!! Congratulations on the publication! Totally deserved! This one is exceptional. I LOVE when you call the Sun "dogmatic" And all the rest of it is pretty awesome too, I just don't know how to praise it more except for the fact that I mostly DO NOT love summers but this one actually made me quite cheerful about it :))

on May. 21 2013 at 3:53 pm
MusicNerd123 SILVER, Palm Beach Gardens, Florida
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The imagery is great in this piece. It also made me laugh because I deal with sunburn every time I walk outside. Good job!

on May. 17 2013 at 7:12 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
56 articles 0 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

Thanks so much! I would be happy to take a look at your work. :)

on May. 17 2013 at 6:34 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
56 articles 0 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

  That is fantastic!!! :D Your work is so great; you definitely deserve the recognition. :)

on May. 15 2013 at 9:29 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I've read this before but didn't comment......CONGRATS ON THE MAG!!!!! XD I just made it too!! ^-^

on May. 15 2013 at 5:05 pm
laurensoccer SILVER, Palm Beach Gardens, Florida
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The poem is great. Even though the poem doesn't rhyme, it feels like it does. It has a definite beat and voice. I would really appreciate it if you could check out some of my poems. Thanks.

on May. 8 2013 at 9:07 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
56 articles 0 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

Haha I'm glad you got that from it

on May. 4 2013 at 9:55 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

ha! this is so great- the twisted new outlook to contrast all the overplayed sunny poems and totally well writen

on Apr. 9 2013 at 8:38 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
56 articles 0 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

Thank you! :)

OldYoungOne said...
on Apr. 9 2013 at 2:58 pm
Ive never had that problem with the sun but I like the imagery :)


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