Elemental Love MAG

August 23, 2008
By Nicole Brooks SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
Nicole Brooks SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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When I saw you
It was chemistry.
I knew then we were meant to be
In equilibrium,
Like sodium and chloride
(But not so tart).
You were my dioxide; and
Our glance was the start
Of a homogeneous reaction,
An explosive combustion
Of neon and helium.
And we’d be like an element,
Completely inseparable.
And when you laid that rock-hard
Hunk of flawless,
Hexoctahedral carbon
Onto my finger,
I knew we would forever
Have triple bonds
To tie together our heartstrings.



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on Mar. 15 2013 at 1:39 am
Nicole Brooks SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Thank you!  I'm happy it could do that; it's what I was hoping for when I wrote it ^^ It's also really wonderful to know that it has this kind of lasting power, so double thank you ^~^

on Feb. 27 2013 at 9:14 pm
gossamergirl GOLD, Nowhere, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." ~ Moulin Rouge

I absolutely LOVE chemistry and love poems. This made me happy; it made me feel all bubbly inside. You combined two of my favorite things perfectly. Thank you.    ~Goss :)

HillaryJo said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 4:35 pm
HillaryJo, Anderson, Indiana
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I love chemistry! This is a great poem with a great tie-in! This is great!

spency SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:17 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

5/5 good job...visit me comment and rate

vitzy BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 4:52 pm
vitzy BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
What goes around comes around

Congrats!This poem is great!

I usually hate the poems that deal with soemthing school realted but I love this poem!!!


on Apr. 20 2010 at 2:33 am
mcpanicfanic SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
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I usually dont like poems about guy/girl stuff. but this one is good.

juliannaa said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:11 pm
juliannaa, Saugus, Massachusetts
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This is my favorite poem since I started here, I really like it. It's so cute! i can't wait to read your other stuff :)

on Jan. 27 2010 at 7:28 pm
andshesfearless GOLD, West Harrison, New York
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Favorite Quote:
when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.
-jimi hendrix-

hahhaha this is adorablee!!!

on Jan. 23 2010 at 8:27 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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o so sweeeeet!

on Jun. 6 2009 at 3:00 am
SillySarah BRONZE, Covert, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Live today as if there is no tomorrow.

love this!!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 20 2009 at 12:45 am
[Omg!]

[i lve this poem]

[it's fantastic]

[great wording]

lady_kid said...
on Apr. 17 2009 at 9:21 pm
I lovethis poem. Im not into science but i love this poem....

on Apr. 9 2009 at 10:21 pm
Babybluelove1 SILVER, Clyde, Texas
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OMG,THIS SOUNDS LIKE ME AND THATS HOW I FELT WHEN I MEET MY BOYFRIEND AND WE HAVE BEEN DATING SINCE 4TH GRADE WE REALLY LIKE EACHOTHER!!!!!!!!!! GREAT WRITING ITS SOO DEEP AND LOVING I LOVE LOVE POEMS!!!!

on Feb. 15 2009 at 9:30 pm
SoccerGrl517 SILVER, Hillsboro, Missouri
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wow I really like this poem. I do not have any passion for science but your poem is uniquely and wisely written. I like it alot.

greattt said...
on Feb. 12 2009 at 12:07 am
this is great, i dont care about ppl who say its unromantic, the point is that its not about sweetness but the feelings you have when youre with someone that ur attracted to, except said in a cute kinda way

on Feb. 2 2009 at 10:15 pm
I was not impressed with the poem, nor by the perspective of love. However, I believe it was well-written; overall I do not like the poem, though. Yet if writing is your passion, then good luck!

fabi123 said...
on Jan. 23 2009 at 3:15 pm
OKAy WELL WHAT CAN i SAy BOUt tHiS

BOOK it WASENt REALLy ALL tHAt qOOD it qOt ME tHiNKiN ALL DAy AT SCOOL WELL tHAt JUSt My OPiNiON..!WELL qOOD LUCK WitH tHE RESt OF yUR BOOKS!=]

sexy justin said...
on Jan. 8 2009 at 10:41 pm
the same thing happenend 2 m3 but i was at lunch

abmik49 said...
on Jan. 6 2009 at 11:39 pm
Agh....Again, thank you, everyone ^ ^ I can't say how happy this makes me. And Evans, I am *so* flattered that you're sharing it with your class! :D

on Jan. 5 2009 at 1:18 am
i hate chemistry


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