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I am Order.
I bring peace to every soul.
I care about your well being.
I bring chaos to its end,
And bring in a new world and rules.
Leaders and families use me wisely.
But Dictators use me poorly.
In times of darkness, evil shall rise.
But good will triumph and conquer the skies.
And order will bring peace and justice for all.
I am Order.



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LaChouetteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 5:27 pm:
Hello! I think this piece is very good! The grammar and spelling is very good and I really like the examples used to show the ways order affects us in our lives. Very nice! 
 
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ThePHSMuse said...
Apr. 9 at 1:28 pm:
To whoever views this: if you could please comment what you think, that would be greatly appreciated!! :)
 
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