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Twinkling in the distance
Ever so far away
So near but so far
Never to be touched by a human hand
Or tainted by the fingerprints of another being
Stars are said to be floating balls of gas
But that is a scientific explanation.
Really, stars are like lamp-posts that light up the sky,
Guiding drunken deities home after a long day of both work and rest.




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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 19 at 1:46 am:
I love it - the way that you use the scientific meaning of stars reworded so that it doesn't sound too scientific-y but more like how an average person would say it. Great job!
 
Gabri replied...
today at 6:53 pm :
Thank you! :D
 
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