March 2, 2013
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Something to be reckoned with
Placed in hearts with care
Certainly, not a myth
Rough as a bear

Comes creeping up
Out of no where
An enticing pup
Not giving a single care

Whipping at its victim
Or cradling them in its arm
Don’t be the victim
That gets in harm

Myself has a different story
One that is unique
Hate, love packed in one lorry
Darkness, light flowing down one streak

In my heart
Lays only one feeling
Pure love like art
That is as big as the highest ceiling

For you

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Enderman said...
Apr. 5, 2013 at 5:29 pm
This is AMAZING!!!  I understand what you mean when you say, "a rare feeling."  Anyway, this is AWESOME!!!  Never ever stop writing!!!
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Mar. 21, 2013 at 9:40 am
Awww I cant believe no one commented on this yet!!! Its a great poem and the emotion is very strong ;) Awesome!
surferblonde said...
Mar. 21, 2013 at 9:03 am
OMG! This is amazing! You almost made me cry. And it's not like you're sitting next to me.
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