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Gypsy Feet

March 1, 2013
By YouRascalYou SILVER, Albuquqerque, New Mexico
YouRascalYou SILVER, Albuquqerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
-Robert Frost


My mom
Says I have gypsy feet.
They are always taking off,
Sashaying
Into meadows
Of purple poppies
And alabaster snapdragons.
She says
She doesn’t know where I get them.



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on Mar. 18 2013 at 2:15 pm
GinryuStargazer BRONZE, N/A, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
This world is just a battleground for ideals.

I liked the imagery here. The short syntax portrays the image of a child "sashaying", as you say. However, the line breaks seem arbitrary and it doesn't feel finished!!