Soul of Coal

March 1, 2013
By SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"What does not kill you makes you stronger!" or
"Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself" Love doesn't bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam


I have a soul of coal that blackens my heart. This coal I cart weighs down my heart. How terribly my heart starts to smart. But when the coal is set a blaze, up my spirits will raise. Reborn again, I walk out of life's maze. With a soul of Fire my heart rejoices with my heart light and merry. I make use of my life by making the world bright!



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 17 2013 at 6:06 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

The internal rhyme here and there especially with soul and coal add playfulness to this somewhat emotional piece. Very nicely written. 

on Aug. 23 2013 at 10:28 pm
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
25 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What does not kill you makes you stronger!" or
"Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself" Love doesn't bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam

smarts means to sting or hurt so as to become painful is what i meant

midnightwoah said...
on Aug. 8 2013 at 8:17 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve." -Stephen Chbosky

I was a bit confused at "starts to smarts." Good understanding of caring others burdens for their pleasure. :^()


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