Soul of Coal

March 1, 2013
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I have a soul of coal that blackens my heart. This coal I cart weighs down my heart. How terribly my heart starts to smart. But when the coal is set a blaze, up my spirits will raise. Reborn again, I walk out of life's maze. With a soul of Fire my heart rejoices with my heart light and merry. I make use of my life by making the world bright!





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Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 17, 2013 at 6:06 pm
The internal rhyme here and there especially with soul and coal add playfulness to this somewhat emotional piece. Very nicely written. 
 
Midnight5765 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2013 at 8:17 pm
I was a bit confused at "starts to smarts." Good understanding of caring others burdens for their pleasure. :^()
 
S.S.Splatters replied...
Aug. 23, 2013 at 10:28 pm
smarts means to sting or hurt so as to become painful is what i meant
 
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