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Dead Alive

March 8, 2013
By Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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Even as i was born i was dead alive,
thoughts here but my soul has gone,
somehow on birth i lost that bond,
those that most would be quite fond,
whoever has my soul i guess there a con,
because im no godfather no comparison to the don, the only thing i have are fights i have won,
battles to become the greatest son,
now in the end i feel like the only one,
family is nothing of interest,
friends have many points to confess,
i have a secret i prive,
a thirst for blood i thrive,
my secret is that i am deed alive.

© Mark P. Woodside, NY

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i just thought i should make something a little creative tell me what you think.
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Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 14 2013 at 7:43 am
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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lol man thanks alot and i really will try to get me a novel started
sadesdd DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 13 2013 at 11:49 am
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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I never would have thought about this before, interesting. Maybe you should write a novel.... I like the picture you picked as well.
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 12 2013 at 8:03 am
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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thx peeps
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 12 2013 at 8:02 am
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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lol thanks alot i really think its great you guys enjoy my work so much
emi_is_fab SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2013 at 6:52 pm
emi_is_fab SILVER, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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I like it a lot 
sydneylouise_101 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2013 at 6:36 pm
sydneylouise_101 BRONZE, Oak Forest, Illinois
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this is super creative and very fun to read and say outloud. My sister an di have been sitting here reading and rapping it!
Francis.R BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2013 at 1:05 pm
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I love your poem.....
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 11 2013 at 12:54 pm
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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thank you very much and ill have to think on that novel and it is kinda of a rap
Rebel21 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 10 2013 at 11:55 pm
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I love this creativity and would have never thought of this idea. It sounds kind of like a rap when you read it out loud I love it! It sounds like an incredible storyline for a novel?!? If you write it I will read it! Amazing creativity love it!