Dead Alive

March 8, 2013
Even as i was born i was dead alive,
thoughts here but my soul has gone,
somehow on birth i lost that bond,
those that most would be quite fond,
whoever has my soul i guess there a con,
because im no godfather no comparison to the don, the only thing i have are fights i have won,
battles to become the greatest son,
now in the end i feel like the only one,
family is nothing of interest,
friends have many points to confess,
i have a secret i prive,
a thirst for blood i thrive,
my secret is that i am deed alive.

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sadesdd said...
Mar. 13, 2013 at 11:49 am
I never would have thought about this before, interesting. Maybe you should write a novel.... I like the picture you picked as well.
Lawless-FlameRose replied...
Mar. 14, 2013 at 7:43 am
lol man thanks alot and i really will try to get me a novel started
sydneylouise_101 said...
Mar. 11, 2013 at 6:36 pm
this is super creative and very fun to read and say outloud. My sister an di have been sitting here reading and rapping it!
Lawless-FlameRose replied...
Mar. 12, 2013 at 8:02 am
lol thanks alot i really think its great you guys enjoy my work so much
Hope.B said...
Mar. 10, 2013 at 11:55 pm
I love this creativity and would have never thought of this idea. It sounds kind of like a rap when you read it out loud I love it! It sounds like an incredible storyline for a novel?!? If you write it I will read it! Amazing creativity love it!
Lawless-FlameRose replied...
Mar. 11, 2013 at 12:54 pm
thank you very much and ill have to think on that novel and it is kinda of a rap
Francis.R replied...
Mar. 11, 2013 at 1:05 pm
I love your poem.....
DUCKYZndTOSTERZ This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 11, 2013 at 6:52 pm
I like it a lot 
Lawless-FlameRose replied...
Mar. 12, 2013 at 8:03 am
thx peeps
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