Why I Cry

March 6, 2013
By monkeymorgan BRONZE, Middlebury, Indiana
monkeymorgan BRONZE, Middlebury, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fair means that everybody gets what they need and the only way to get what you need is to make that happen yourself." Rick Riordan


You ask why I cry
But the truth is you don’t want to know
You just want to put on a show
To make you into the good guy
Who helps the broken when they are lost
When you can see that I am crying because of what you did
What did you think would happen
The night you betrayed your family
The night you ruined everything
I cannot say I am surprised
I saw this was coming
Through all of the fighting
My little eyes saw the hurt you put her through
And for that I say these three words
I hate you
So now you know the secret behind the tears
Because you hurt those I hold dear



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on Jul. 7 2013 at 3:16 pm
awesome, i would want more of these poems on my readin list  

Niquel said...
on Jun. 24 2013 at 3:00 pm
Niquel, Lipan, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If you don't design your own plan, you'll fall into someone else's plan. And guess what they have planned for you? Not much.

-Jim Rohn

Lol, I hate you. That was the best part of this poem. I love it.

on May. 6 2013 at 5:53 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

wow! you put a lot of emotion into this! wonderful job! 5 stars!

on Apr. 12 2013 at 8:26 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

I Love it!

on Apr. 12 2013 at 8:25 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

I can not relate exactly to how you feel, but I understand what you are saying.  You're poem is really good.  Please continue to write poetry, because I would like to read more of your work 

on Mar. 29 2013 at 5:01 pm
TheyAllCallMeJoJo SILVER, Park City, Utah
6 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When I'm gone, just carry on. Don't mourn, rejoice! Every time you hear the sound of my voice. Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling and I didn't feel a thing, so baby don't feel no pain. Just smile back..." - Eminem

Sooo good! I love it!

on Mar. 29 2013 at 2:49 pm
Nightcat PLATINUM, Dublin, Other
29 articles 4 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.”
― Marilyn Monroe

Awesome poem :) Good luck in futher poems:)

on Mar. 27 2013 at 8:32 am
IndigoElisabeth SILVER, Woodbury, New Jersey
5 articles 1 photo 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
John 1:1

Great job! I loved it! The only thing that I think would make it better is more descriptive words. Other than that, it's great! (By the way, this is your prize)

on Mar. 25 2013 at 8:14 am
monkeymorgan BRONZE, Middlebury, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fair means that everybody gets what they need and the only way to get what you need is to make that happen yourself." Rick Riordan

Thank you guys. :)

Mish123 said...
on Mar. 22 2013 at 1:35 pm
Loved it!!!!!!!!

on Mar. 18 2013 at 4:30 pm
Mr.packerbear12 SILVER, Minnesota Lake, Minnesota
5 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Judge lest not you be judged"

"Take the plank out of your own eye before the speck out of your brother's"

"live each day as if it's your last"

"God doesn't give you what you can handle, He helps you handle what you are given"

wow nice job morgan, i can not write a poem close to that good. keep writing!


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