Land and Ocean

My eyes
Is never ending
Mud
Dirt
And dust
You look through it
And you'll eventually get bored
Of its desert
And would rather visit
My blue eyed sister
That'll surely quench your thirst
Because explorers
Never last here





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RarelyJaded This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 3:46 pm
It's callie, btw:). Aww, I loved his! I loved the metaphor, and what it's about..... My only criticism is grammar—the second like should be "are never ending" instead of "is". But I'm in love with this poem XD
 
RarelyJaded This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 3:47 pm
*line* not like...
 
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