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Land and Ocean

My eyes
Is never ending
Mud
Dirt
And dust
You look through it
And you'll eventually get bored
Of its desert
And would rather visit
My blue eyed sister
That'll surely quench your thirst
Because explorers
Never last here



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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:46 pm:
It's callie, btw:). Aww, I loved his! I loved the metaphor, and what it's about..... My only criticism is grammar—the second like should be "are never ending" instead of "is". But I'm in love with this poem XD
 
RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 3:47 pm :
*line* not like...
 
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