Too Good To Be True

February 22, 2013
By LyricLove SILVER, Webster City, Iowa
LyricLove SILVER, Webster City, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the skies the limit when there are foot prints on the moon."


From the beginning I trusted you.
Everything you said made me smile.
The way you touched me gave me goosebumps.
How I was so comfortable around you.
How you told me I was beautiful.
How you told me you really liked me.
I trusted that my secrets were safe with you.
Your every kiss made me weak.
Until the day you basically told me, I couldn't measure up to her...
The pain cut deep for I had trusted you.
I trusted you enough to give you things that were special to me.
You had me wrapped around your finger.
I was puddy in your hands.
But yet, same as before, I should have known, it all was...
Too Good To Be True


The author's comments:
This is for any girl who feels used... you're not alone.

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on Mar. 6 2013 at 10:34 pm
Death.reaper.of.souls.vlad, Ocala, Florida
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so far one of my favorite poems on this site

on Mar. 6 2013 at 11:11 am
Trace.C.Schuelke PLATINUM, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Secrets are secrets for a reason, and some do not wish to see them uncovered. Especially when the secrets are particularly unseemly..."

I like the poetic devices interspspersed throughout the poem, as well as the general feel and flow of it. Nice Job!


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