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See through the raindrops

February 21, 2013
By SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
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SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

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Out the windowpane
Of my car I see,
Each hue diverge
By the tiny crystal-like droplets
Yes, rain is indeed;
A wonder
In every single way.
True beauty reflects in my eyes
The Iris contracts and
I see in those
Three seconds, a million lights
And their pigments fluxing
Ultraviolet, indigo, scarlet and blue
My favorites and all the rest.
With the night time stars
Shining ever so majestically above;
Yet I see and adore
Each car’s headlights, the city,
And the signals, red, amber
And green
They green monster is roaring up there, I think
As I see, yes see! Not watch.

© Jessica L., San Jose, CA

The author's comments:
I wrote this one about how sometimes these little things seem so much more beautiful to us even though we're surrounded by beauty....It's about how I look at the world sometimes.
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SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 17 2013 at 12:33 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1136 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

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Well, basically, "The green monster" is jealousy..actually the stars up in the sky were jealous, how I was giving these raindrops and city lights so muhc importance :P
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 16 2013 at 9:49 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
38 articles 0 photos 445 comments

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"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

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No problem!!! Your work inspires me as usual :D and this happens to me all the time looking through the raindrops as if they are a porthole to a different world. So poetic :) Anyway, I didn't ally get the green monster line is it the car? I wasn't sure. And thank you for reading my work. I think that I tried to get notified whenever you do something, but it didn't work. I will definitely try again because I live to hear from my favorite people!!!!It always makes my day :D soooo that's all for now Dua, keep rockin
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 16 2013 at 4:52 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1136 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

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WOW, Thank You Liv! I am so overjoyed that you can completely relate to this! :D :D  By the way, did you get the green monster line? :P  And Of course , I mean I always love to read your work...I get updated about the new stuff instantly but yes, I do love to go back and read the old stuff that I haven't read so don't you dare to think fo rone millisecond that "I can't"......Thanks again. Love you.
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 15 2013 at 9:27 am
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
38 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

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Wow Dua, I think this is perhaps my favorite by you. It is truly amazing and for me, completely relateable. See, I love rainy car-trips because all I do is sit and watch the world, no see the world as it truly is, with beauty and without. And your descriptions of the droplets were spot on, I mean they really were and the part about all the colors, god, I love when that happenes. Beautiful poem, from start to finish. I think you really conveyed your message. Also, its not just about the beauty of the rain, but the beauty of the world and how if you look close enough you can see that everything is beautiful. Wonderful, again. Ummmm, one more thing, could you look at something of mine that you haven't read. If you can't that is okay to because your work should not come with a cost :P Anyway, wonderful job Dua, Keep rockin
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 8 2013 at 10:47 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1136 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

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Ditto! :DD
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 8 2013 at 8:39 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

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I've always wanted to go to London, and here all the the people talk and just stroll around!  I would like to go to Paris again and when it's pouring rain (Without lightning) I would like to go to the tippy top of the eiffel tower and soak it all up!  Plus if I remember correctly Paris has cobblestone streets, which I dig all the way!  And you're welcome! xD
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 8 2013 at 5:38 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1136 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

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Me too! I love it SO much, My aunt lives in London she says if I ever went and lived there, all the rain would make me hate it, I told her, I could never hate rain, I would always love it.....It's is just too beautifull,, No poem can ever do it justice...haha...I'm so happy you read it and liked it....Thank YOu! :DD
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 7 2013 at 7:18 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

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I love the rain...it makes me feel so happy if I could dance I would go out and do "Singing in the Rain" oh well I can just sing it...anyways nicely written good job! xD