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See through the raindrops

Out the windowpane
Of my car I see,
Each hue diverge
By the tiny crystal-like droplets
Yes, rain is indeed;
A wonder
In every single way.
True beauty reflects in my eyes
The Iris contracts and
I see in those
Three seconds, a million lights
And their pigments fluxing
Ultraviolet, indigo, scarlet and blue
My favorites and all the rest.
With the night time stars
Shining ever so majestically above;
Yet I see and adore
Each car’s headlights, the city,
And the signals, red, amber
And green
They green monster is roaring up there, I think
As I see, yes see! Not watch.




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JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 7:18 pm:
I love the rain...it makes me feel so happy if I could dance I would go out and do "Singing in the Rain" oh well I can just sing it...anyways nicely written good job! xD
 
SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 5:38 am :
Me too! I love it SO much, My aunt lives in London she says if I ever went and lived there, all the rain would make me hate it, I told her, I could never hate rain, I would always love it.....It's is just too beautifull,, No poem can ever do it justice...haha...I'm so happy you read it and liked it....Thank YOu! :DD
 
JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 8:39 pm :
I've always wanted to go to London, and here all the the people talk and just stroll around!  I would like to go to Paris again and when it's pouring rain (Without lightning) I would like to go to the tippy top of the eiffel tower and soak it all up!  Plus if I remember correctly Paris has cobblestone streets, which I dig all the way!  And you're welcome! xD
 
SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 10:47 pm :
Ditto! :DD
 
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