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Improving The World

February 27, 2013
By One_Of_A_Kind GOLD, Rocksprings, Texas
One_Of_A_Kind GOLD, Rocksprings, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If You can Make It Halfway,
You Can Make It All The Way


A World Torn With Hate And War,
Too Much Violence And Desperation,
With People So Mean To The Core,
Where's The Inspiration?

Since People Act Like They're In Preschool,
This World Is Full of Catastrophe,
With People So Mean And Cruel,
It Spreads Internationally

They All Need To Add Personality,
And Also Imagination,
So They Can Try To Forget About Reality,
And Stop Acting Life As An Abomination

If You Put Some Love And Care In This Place,
People Will Start To See,
A Person Instead Of A Face,
And A Lot More Generosity

We All Need Love No Matter What Generation,
And Put Others First Instead Of Us,
No Matter What Identification,
If We All Do This We Are Making Progress

A Better Living Space Is What We Should Strive,
Before We Know It, This World Will Become A Better Place,
People Will Have Better And Brighter Lifes,
No Matter What Race

So Put Down The Gun,
Forget About Hate,
And Learn To Have Fun,
So What If You're A Little Late?



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on Mar. 12 2013 at 3:39 pm
One_Of_A_Kind GOLD, Rocksprings, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If You can Make It Halfway,
You Can Make It All The Way

:)ol thanks! :) it's not this poem though, The Poem Is gonna be called "Masquerade" sorry if it's similar about the mask part though! but i wont plaigerize :)

on Mar. 11 2013 at 6:24 pm
AriannaNicole PLATINUM, Palmyra, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
A #2 pencil and a dream can take you anywhere.
Joyce A. Myers

Yeah, its fine if you use one of my poems as inspiration :) Just don't forget to mention me;) haha i'm just kidding!! Stay strong, bro!

on Mar. 6 2013 at 8:19 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

Very n.ice! I notice you had a few capitalization mistakes, but besides that you portayed some exceelent points. You also might want to go back and check your rhyme scheme