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Saving Love

Decision made
Knife selected
Doors are closed
Hope's forsaken

Deep breath in
God make this fast
Let it out slow
After all it's your last

Eyes catch hand
Cold and alone
Without his fingers
Entwining your own

Blood on blood
Soul meet soul
Hearts collide
Your lips meet mine

Knife falls
Hearts are open
Hope returns
Promise unbroken



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Um... quick question. Does anyone know how I can look at comments on here? 'Cause, it's telling me there are several, but I can't find them any where. If anyone could help, that'd be awesome.
 
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