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Love & Hate

February 19, 2013
By Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Do not follow those who follow others for they are only followers themselves.


I live my life based of two things,
nothing more nothing less,
I with only two emotions,
Only two known notions,
They flow together greater then the ocean,
Sometimes one is felt greater then the other,
Theres no need for any other,
So i take no heed why bother,
sometimes having them both at once can be a smother,
I have only these because thier all i have to relate,
those two emotions are love and hate.


The author's comments:
I really kinda live like this so judge away.

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on Feb. 25 2013 at 1:06 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

I really like the theme of the poem and the way you threaded both together. There were some grammatical errors like capitalization and "then" should be "than".


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