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A dying heart

A girl with happy heart
A guy who loves her so
A fight of ages
Only to show
She really cared
He hit her
She cried
He cussed her
She cried


Her heart slowing
Her true emotions showing
AS she lays in her bed
Her eyes closing
She mind disapering
She slips away


A dying heart can not be healed
Mended or sown
It can not be saved
Broken into a thousand pieces

Her heart is gone
as well as her
A dying heat can not be healed




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country-cuteyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 5:21 pm:
really good like it alot but a lil sad tho
 
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Sarinta said...
Feb. 18 at 8:28 pm:
this is a grat poem as it shows how that girl was really feeling
 
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CTS207This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 18 at 1:56 pm:
very nice though could use some editing. "she mind disapering" should be "her mind disappearing". Also "AS" should be "as".  Beyond all that this is a really nice poem. Keep writing
 
linzy21This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 25 at 2:15 pm :
I will Continue writing, it is a passion of mine as well as music. Thank you ever so much.
 
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writingtolive said...
Feb. 17 at 8:32 pm:
This is one of my new favorite pieces! I felt the connection. your a strong writer. I love it!
 
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