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A dying heart

February 15, 2013
By Lindseybr SILVER, Macarthur, West Virginia
Lindseybr SILVER, Macarthur, West Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

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Without music life would be a mistake


A girl with happy heart
A guy who loves her so
A fight of ages
Only to show
She really cared
He hit her
She cried
He cussed her
She cried


Her heart slowing
Her true emotions showing
AS she lays in her bed
Her eyes closing
She mind disapering
She slips away


A dying heart can not be healed
Mended or sown
It can not be saved
Broken into a thousand pieces

Her heart is gone
as well as her
A dying heat can not be healed



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on May. 3 2013 at 5:21 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

really good like it alot but a lil sad tho

on Feb. 25 2013 at 2:15 pm
Lindseybr SILVER, Macarthur, West Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

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Without music life would be a mistake

I will Continue writing, it is a passion of mine as well as music. Thank you ever so much.

Sarinta BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2013 at 8:28 pm
Sarinta BRONZE, Traralgon, Other
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Lies hurt, truth heals
my heart is ur heart ur sole is my sole

this is a grat poem as it shows how that girl was really feeling

on Feb. 18 2013 at 1:56 pm
HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 38 comments

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"...Time and Chance happened to them all." Ecc 9:11

very nice though could use some editing. "she mind disapering" should be "her mind disappearing". Also "AS" should be "as".  Beyond all that this is a really nice poem. Keep writing

on Feb. 17 2013 at 8:32 pm
writingtolive BRONZE, Uniontown, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

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I don't listen to anyone but my inner child- Amy Winehouse

This is one of my new favorite pieces! I felt the connection. your a strong writer. I love it!


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