Ourselves | Teen Ink

Ourselves

February 15, 2013
By LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)


Frustrating heeds us all
Sometimes more than word
In screams and yells
We brought this upon ourselves.

We brought this upon ourselves.
Through the beginning of expectation
thinking some of us can handle
The flood while others really can't.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 5 comments.


on Jun. 2 2013 at 6:17 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

You're very welcome! And I hate it when that happens! O:

on Jun. 2 2013 at 5:51 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)

Jade, you are awesome. Truly amazing. I never get emails anymore from teenink saying I got a comment. This time, I opened it up and I saw a large line of them FROM YOU. You are a sweetheart, thank you!!!

on Jun. 1 2013 at 2:36 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I didn't really understand the first half but i loved the second. So true. It doesn't seem like accountability is a theme in many young people's writing, so it's kind of refreshing. 

on Feb. 19 2013 at 4:00 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)

Thank you very much for the feedback. I don't think I get enough true opinion and info on my work as I'd like to, so I appreciate you giving me that. I'm going to try and work on  that. :) Once again, thank you. :)

on Feb. 18 2013 at 1:59 pm
HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...Time and Chance happened to them all." Ecc 9:11

I like the idea, but I feel as though it was blocked by the emotion that I presume must have inspired this work. This could use some good formating and expanding on the idea via diving deeper into the emotion of frustration. But beyond all this its a really good start.


Smith Summer

Parkland Speaks

Campus Compare