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Bitter Tears of Wine

Wine glass half full
Emptied by a man
Who stood on his own sentence
Certainly not his own kind
Wandering on a silver road
Dangling by a thread
Wondering where life still stood
And death soon began



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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2013 at 2:34 pm:
I love the uncertainty so skillfully conveyed by this poem. It's great, and just abstract enough to draw you in. Love it!
 
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ShatteredReflections said...
Feb. 18, 2013 at 12:21 pm:
Wow...this is very good.  I really get a mental image with your poem. :)
 
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