Lie To Me

February 14, 2013
By dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“If consensus is overrated, I think balance is, too.
I have no interest in living a balanced life.
I want a life of adventure.” | Chris Guillebeau


Lie to me sweet lover,
Lift me from my woes.
The truth is that of yesterday,
And to us I do suppose,
That we all are just human,
So to lie is but a sin,
I do believe the truth would hurt,
Much more than the lies of men.
Make believe my love,
Weave me a web of stories,
Entangle my heart and mind,
So through the sky Im soaring.
Without a care in the world,
Just keep me believing,
Love, My heart is a fragile thing,
Through your lies just keep decieving.



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dya.o PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 7 2013 at 11:11 am
dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
43 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If consensus is overrated, I think balance is, too.
I have no interest in living a balanced life.
I want a life of adventure.” | Chris Guillebeau

Thank You!! I do sometimes have problems with punctuation and what not but I guess I got this one right. :)

on Mar. 6 2013 at 10:41 am
SteelersJdog GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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The flow of this is absolutely beautifl. Time and time again, I constantly get frustrated with people underusing punctuation in their poems; you did a fantastic job of utilizing commas and periods to enhance the flow of your poem. The flow makes the theme of the poem really stick out. It has a natural rythym until the end which pretty much stands out against the rest of the poem. This enhances the point that you make in the last stanza and emphasizes it. Superb job!

dya.o PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 27 2013 at 9:16 am
dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
43 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If consensus is overrated, I think balance is, too.
I have no interest in living a balanced life.
I want a life of adventure.” | Chris Guillebeau

Thanks! :)  

on Feb. 25 2013 at 4:02 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Good rhythm and rhymes. I like this one a lot!


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