first day back

first day back
and i could tell
he was there
and i wanted to yell
few days later and things begin to smooth out
few days later and i had no doubt
i liked him still
and i had a feeling i always will





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ClassyPoet This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 8:55 pm
okay no offense but this is one of the most dull, lazy, unimaginative poems i've ever read in my life. it had no reason, emotion or power. frankly, i can't believe this got rated #1! all it is a few messy lines and a few poor rhymes! one of the least meaningful pieces i've ever seen in my life.
 
TheSkyOwesMeRain This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 2:26 am
Great work :) 
 
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