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first day back

first day back
and i could tell
he was there
and i wanted to yell
few days later and things begin to smooth out
few days later and i had no doubt
i liked him still
and i had a feeling i always will



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ClassyPoet This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 8:55 pm:
okay no offense but this is one of the most dull, lazy, unimaginative poems i've ever read in my life. it had no reason, emotion or power. frankly, i can't believe this got rated #1! all it is a few messy lines and a few poor rhymes! one of the least meaningful pieces i've ever seen in my life.
 
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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 2:26 am:
Great work :) 
 
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