first day back

February 1, 2013
By tiahmarie BRONZE, Dexter, Missouri
tiahmarie BRONZE, Dexter, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
i didnt say it would be easy i said it would be worth it

first day back
and i could tell
he was there
and i wanted to yell
few days later and things begin to smooth out
few days later and i had no doubt
i liked him still
and i had a feeling i always will

The author's comments:
i wrote this because it was my first day back and i saw my old boyfriend. seeing him brought back so many memories. things are almost as good as ever right now.

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on Feb. 17 2013 at 8:55 pm
BlueSupernova ELITE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Damn it, Ted!"

okay no offense but this is one of the most dull, lazy, unimaginative poems i've ever read in my life. it had no reason, emotion or power. frankly, i can't believe this got rated #1! all it is a few messy lines and a few poor rhymes! one of the least meaningful pieces i've ever seen in my life.

on Feb. 17 2013 at 2:26 am
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
13 articles 1 photo 303 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.

You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Great work :) 


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