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Night sky

February 6, 2013
By dvnhghs734 BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
dvnhghs734 BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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Night sky I see the moon, stars, and a little fog.



I see the moon blue and white. I hear my dog by my side, along with that I also hear the










wind.

I feel happy chilling with my dog, sleeping outside on the trampoline. I am wondering what time it is? Who is still up?

I repeat the words as I look at the night sky I say “ night sky, night sky, night sky” as I see the moon I say “ moon, moon, moon”
as I see the start I say “start, start, starts”

as I fade fast asleep.



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on Feb. 16 2013 at 8:08 pm
Megan MacKinnon Runge, Catonsville, Maryland
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I enjoy this poem. I really like how you repeat the words to create a sort of lulling sense. The only suggestion I would have if you wanted to make this poem better is to eliminate the word "chilling." It sounds a little bit too informal. Otherwise, this poem is great!