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People believe in life that there is only one,
The only one who helps you in pointing your way to the sun.
And it’s that one whatever a moon has always meant
And whatever a sun will always sing.

I know you that are within me
And I carry your heart everywhere with me.
There is nothing I shall ever fear
For I know that you are always near.

From this moment joy sits upon our lives,
Tweeting loud and humming sweet.
Like gentle breeze soothing us,
Innocence and virtue meet.

Now that you have brought love in my life,
All the love and care given to me
Has made me realized how rare
It is to find a person like you in me.



With that, love and harmony combine
And round will only true souls entwine
You have brightened my soul
And it is only you that has made me whole.

Our roots of love shall entangle deep within
That hope in soul and love in heart must begin.
My love for you, your love for me is the strongest tree,
growing minute by minute making us feel free.

You have entered my life like no ordinary sun rays,
And you have my eternal thanks for teaching me your ways.
When we leave, we shall leave in the arms of each other,
Forever in love we shall leave always together.




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Maryam1996This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 23 at 5:58 pm:
Thanks Mr. Potts!!!
 
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ejhelmer said...
Feb. 22 at 8:50 pm:
I love this! It's amazing!
 
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Mr. Potts said...
Feb. 20 at 10:26 pm:
Maryam, I knew you were a gifted math student, but I had no idea how much of an amazing poet you are! You truly have a way of capturing every word. This poem is something that seems to to have not only from a deep place in your heart but also seemingly from a person years beyond that of yours. I commend you on a fine piece of work!
 
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Maryam1996This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20 at 8:36 pm:
:))) happy face
 
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Vini said...
Feb. 20 at 8:04 am:
So proud of you , Marayam ! Articulate  you always have been , but never knew you were in to wriitng ...and that too poetry ! wow ....would like to see more from you and on different aspects of life....way to go !
 
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Mfilicetti said...
Feb. 19 at 12:06 pm:
Lovely poem! It truly made me smile and think of similar relationships that I have experienced, which is a sign of an evocative writer.
 
Gracias1996This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 23 at 12:41 pm :
Thanks a lot, glad you loved it!!!!!!
 
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pyarija said...
Feb. 17 at 10:23 am:
It was nice to read your poem. It shows the depth of your feelings. Well done Maryam!Kep up the good work!!
 
Maryam1996This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 23 at 5:59 pm :
Thanks Ma'am, glad you loved it!!
 
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The rocker said...
Feb. 17 at 9:28 am:
This is a very beautifull poem. Maryam, i hope you will always shine like this. Well done Maryam
 
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Re2000 said...
Feb. 17 at 7:51 am:
Nice poem, keep it up!!!! Absolutely loved it!!!! :)
 
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rootb33r said...
Feb. 17 at 1:50 am:
Just wow!! Its brilliant. Though here and there it could have been a bit more flesh out! I personally think it this is brilliant. Made me smile! Bravo!
 
Maryam1996This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 23 at 6:00 pm :
Thanks!!! Glad you loved it!!!!!
 
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Princelove9000 said...
Feb. 16 at 11:12 pm:
This work touched me very deeply. I could actually feel the love between these two individuals, it was powerful. I am glad I read this and it brightened my day.
 
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Dave said...
Feb. 16 at 10:19 pm:
Dear Mariam : I enjoyed reading your poem. Quite meaningful and touching. I know you are a very talented person and I wish you the very best in all that you do. Keep it up!  
 
Maryam1996This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 23 at 6:00 pm :
Thanks sir!
 
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