Devon MAG

August 24, 2008
By Teresa Pigford, Brooklyn, NY

hello sweet sounds of autumn … i await your return … where have you been?
lost in the melody of your own voice,
the beat of your own drum?
come back to mama,
before this summer tune bids me dead,
nevah did like the mention of departing,
yet i,
i am willing to wave a sweet good-bye to these hot days and hotter nights,
i’ll be waiting, autumn leaves,
for you to come back and comfort my weary soul.


The author's comments:
this poem is about my dear fiend devon. he has inspired countless pieces of my art work in various forms such as paintings, songs, composed pieces, and fictional and non fictional stories. It is a pleasure to use this inspiration to tap into the souls and hearts of others.

Y.I.M.V.U

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on May. 10 2014 at 1:55 am
Unspoken_Word SILVER, Bronx, New York
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This poem was amazing! I found the first couple of lines to be very compelling and captivating.

on Oct. 9 2011 at 4:40 pm
Countrylife4 GOLD, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday soon we're gonna catch that dream we've been chasing"
"Seven days without a horse makes one weak."
"The worst part of riding is when you dismount."

Insult my clothes, I say, “Okay, thanks for the compliment.”
Insult the way I look, I say, “Thanks for notifying me.”
Mock me and say riding isn’t a sport, and I’ll say,”You say that ’cause you can’t ride.” But before you make fun of my horse, make sure you have “911″ on your speed dial.

that was beautiful!!!

on Feb. 2 2011 at 5:07 pm
silentvocal SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't try to fix what isn't broken

I love the feel this poem gives off, it's like i can get the description and you get all warm inside and you can feel a bit of sunshine on your cheek when you read this-its a great piece, a really great piece.

on Sep. 1 2010 at 9:59 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

the mention of autumn leaves gives this piece a sense of hibernation for winter, not necessarily fall for me... especially with the line "summer tune bids me dead..." interesting thought to think this was inspired from a friend... how does it all fit? good stuff though, read some of mine?

Stephy said...
on Feb. 11 2009 at 2:01 am
I loved it. Amazing

tweedle dee said...
on Feb. 10 2009 at 1:09 pm
well, i think "nevah" gives it voice and personality

Nicovera said...
on Feb. 10 2009 at 12:47 pm
I have often said it, and it is finally true: A Friend without 'R' is nothing but a Fiend! her comment... HILARIOUS but the poem was pretty good

on Jan. 25 2009 at 10:07 pm
What? "nevah" please! why? if you are going to write at least use proper English.

ehh said...
on Jan. 23 2009 at 2:05 pm
Ehhh this was ok idk it wasnt so great...

tweedle dee said...
on Jan. 23 2009 at 1:29 pm
this really touched me. keep on writing!

jessy said...
on Jan. 23 2009 at 1:09 pm
I love teen ink its like I'm reading about my self I feel so confuted! I look forward to more magazines!


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