A cry for Affection

February 10, 2013
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No one cares about this article,
Its just words from someone you don't know,
words from someone with a broken heart,
that they wouldn't dare to show,
and as I write these words,
I feel I cannot breathe,
because the world that is around me,
is solely beginning to leave,
Ill tell you about my self,
Even though you wont take it to mind,
that once I lost my self,
and was surely hard to find,
but once I found myself,
I did not know what to do,
like a dog chasing her tail,
I found myself askew,
I wish these tears would stop,
there flowing way to fast,
I'm so unsure, on how Ill even last.





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AudrithMcfarland said...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 12:27 am
This is so wonderful! Im using it for a project in my English class. Dont stop writing!
 
ValleyMae13 said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 5:53 pm
Oh my God I love all of yalls comments thank you for commenting :) it made me very happy :)
 
SapphireLamour said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 4:22 pm
Beautiful! Just make sure you don't settle for less affection than you deserve and don't forget that you do deserve affection. You are a very talented writer  
 
sadesdd said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 12:17 pm
I like how you started this poem because it grabs the reader and actually makes them care and take it to mind.
 
MarieAntoinette2012 said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 11:30 am
Hey, I understand how you feel. I'm reading this on Valentine's Day after fighting with my boyfriend. The articles I read mean something to me. Other wise, I wouldn't skip luch to be on here.
 
RarelyJaded This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 11:13 pm
I feel like you and I are exactly the same... At least from reading your other poem and now this one too. You are an amazing person and God loves you! Just remember that:)
 
WriterHead This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 10:11 pm
i know exactly how you feel, seriously. just keep living, it'll get better.
 
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