February 10, 2013
I am lying in my bed with a comfy night set
Still I am feeling uncomfortable
Like something is missing in the air.
I should assume you are not going to call
since you have a tactic schedule.
I don’t think there is any hope for patch up..
I don’t even know – have we ever been together?

Radio is on the chest ,
Pillow under my head is almost wet..
Brimming with anxiety and frustration
drawing nonsense illustrations.
Misunderstanding of the time,
Damn! They are clouding my mind.
Tear drops are racing down on my cheeks
Freak! Why you made me so weak?

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ShrutiChauhan said...
Feb. 19, 2013 at 12:21 am
okay. thanx a ton :) Sadesdd
ShrutiChauhan said...
Feb. 19, 2013 at 12:20 am
thanks Geena :)
SapphireLamour said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 4:16 pm
I feel for your confusion and frustration.
sadesdd said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 12:19 pm
I like your rhyming ability:) btw- awesome poem
ShrutiChauhan said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 11:45 am
haha.. yea i know .. :)
annyAngel said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 2:02 am
sweet little poem .. reminding me my old days when i  broke up with my ex. may be same has happened with you but don't worry cuz it would be normal :)
WriterHead This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 10:09 pm
this poem made me weak, lol!!!! good job.
GeenaElise said...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 5:35 pm
I like it. It's different and keeps you wanting to read more. 
crazyShruti replied...
Apr. 16, 2013 at 11:46 pm
thanks elise :)
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