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Zoo Lujan
Do you remember,
The crazy zoo that had no laws?
How about the alpacas,
or the crazy lions and tiger claws?
Well, here’s what you need to know:

We started off with the goose chasing us,
we were startled,
but we were on a bus.

Then we saw the wild pigs,
the crazy sheep
and the goats dig.

Next we wandered to lunch,
even though it was one,
it felt like brunch.

After we went to the macaws,
then the monkeys,
before hearing those tucan calls.

Following that, we headed to the snake,
iguanas, and more parrots.
The photographer took as many pictures as he could take.

Then, we walked to the lions,
tigers, and bears OH MY!
And saw more lions, sea lions, that is.

Finally, we trudged to the hay bails,
and held baby tigers,
my mom said she did, but she really failed.

After that, we happily trotted back to the bus,
that is one
of the stories of you and us.




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suju&dbsk said...
Feb. 11 at 9:55 pm:
This is a very nice poem. Its nicely done and humorus.
 
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suju&dbsk said...
Feb. 11 at 9:10 pm:
This is a very good poem its also very discriptive.
 
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suju&dbsk said...
Feb. 11 at 8:59 pm:
This was a very interesting poem. It was very discriptive.
 
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Liam G. said...
Feb. 11 at 4:17 pm:
Hey Ronan,  I like the piece, very creative and descriptive.  When did you send this in to get published?
 
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marys1 said...
Feb. 11 at 11:05 am:
we have a winner!!!
 
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lilly.gilmore said...
Feb. 11 at 10:38 am:
Congrats, ronanronan!
 
mmskobie1 replied...
Feb. 11 at 10:51 am :
we have a winner ronanronan!
 
ronanronan replied...
Feb. 11 at 11:07 am :
I know, I'm amazing
 
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SirLocoPanda said...
Feb. 11 at 9:31 am:
Did you write this for your first grade english teacher?
 
not_moon replied...
yesterday at 10:53 am :
no, he wrote it for his kindergarden english teacher. duh!
 
ronanronan replied...
yesterday at 10:54 am :
Actually it was for my 2nd grade teacher
 
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