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I wasted my life

I wasted my advice.
I wasted my breathe.
I wasted everything that I had left.
I wasted all of my hard earned money
Just to make you happy.
But now were seperated.
and i can speak no more of your name.
thats because you are, you were and always will be to blame.
now thats a shame.
you were so nice.
but now you are the one to pay the price.



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blbbraunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 11 at 10:03 pm:
Really good,  however you used the wrong form of were (it should be we're).  That stuff kind of bothers me and I have a habit of correcting it. Sorry!
 
TalentedWriter18 replied...
Feb. 27 at 10:30 am :
thanks and yeah i wasnt concentrating. i know that i should have. but thanks for the comment 
 
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k8hustedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 11 at 1:07 pm:
I like it :)
 
TalentedWriter18 replied...
Feb. 27 at 10:30 am :
really? 
 
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