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February 5, 2013
By Anonymous

I used to think
that she loved
me.

I had an obsession with this girl,
I wanted to be with her
forever
and I would stand in my yard
for hours, pacing
back and forth
and thinking about her.

I began to see the idiocy of my
friends,
and a great love
that resonated
deeply within
me,
to a point beyond
words,
yet coming from
words.

And though I am human,
it felt like others
weren't quite as
human.

...And now
I am wandering,
lost
and
confused.

There is a dark red liquid
coming from the walls
and a man
wearing a plain black suit
sitting up in bed,
finally realizing
his life was
a mistake.



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on Feb. 12 2013 at 9:26 pm
AmericanoLounge BRONZE, Johnson City, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm nobody."

Dunno, you tell me.

FlannelSkin said...
on Feb. 12 2013 at 4:30 pm
last stanza. epic.

on Feb. 11 2013 at 11:32 pm
shapeshifter56 GOLD, Cave Creek, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Instead of waiting for the storm to pass, learn to dance in the rain."
--Unknown Author

Not quite sure I understood it, but I like it. Somehow, it's really powerful. You can bet I'll be re-reading this sometime soon :)

on Feb. 11 2013 at 8:59 pm
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"What does not kill you makes you stronger!" or
"Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself" Love doesn't bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam

How do you think this relates to weight?