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By , Johnson City, TN
I used to think
that she loved

I had an obsession with this girl,
I wanted to be with her
and I would stand in my yard
for hours, pacing
back and forth
and thinking about her.

I began to see the idiocy of my
and a great love
that resonated
deeply within
to a point beyond
yet coming from

And though I am human,
it felt like others
weren't quite as

...And now
I am wandering,

There is a dark red liquid
coming from the walls
and a man
wearing a plain black suit
sitting up in bed,
finally realizing
his life was
a mistake.

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FlannelSkin said...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 4:30 pm:
last stanza. epic.
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shapeshifter56 said...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 11:32 pm:
Not quite sure I understood it, but I like it. Somehow, it's really powerful. You can bet I'll be re-reading this sometime soon :)
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S.S.SplattersThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 8:59 pm:
How do you think this relates to weight?
AmericanoLounge This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 9:26 pm :
Dunno, you tell me.
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