January 31, 2013
Hatred is a painful dred,
A flaming arosin in the head,
Sitting in your stomach hard as led,
A powerful thing given the cred,
Hatred has a life,
It loves to thrive,
It rests in your heart buzzing in its hive,
Hatred causes racism murder and more,
Once you have hatred it goes deep in your core,
While its in it takes a full mind tour,
Love has no chance when hatred involved,
Only a pure mind can have the problem resolved,
Over the years hatred has grown and evolved,
Hatred detroys families,
You know hatreds reached its grand finally,
When love is gone,
And armageddon has begun.

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alone13 said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 10:31 am
I definatly can relate to this poem
thatunknownthingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 7, 2013 at 12:44 pm
well, that was a piece I completely agree with, and is a strong topic as well. But you could polish it a bit to get a smoother flow of words perhaps, and the rhyming scheme hasn't worked out well. 
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