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Escape

Cold expressions
Broken promises
New life ahead
If i could find it

Lose myself into the woods
Live in the forest
No Blanket to cover me
I am now lower

No more troubles
Until they stumble in my way
And destroy my dreams
I feel so gray

I'm not superficial
Just aspiring something
I want to find a place to hide
I want whats really worth it




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abbey92This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 4 at 10:04 pm:
i really like this. something i can relate to
 
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nevermindme180 said...
Feb. 4 at 5:35 pm:
Really inspiring. Kind of reminds me of how i feel. really good job of capturing the picture.
 
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EtherealLibrettoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 4 at 9:56 am:
Wow what a great poem! I really liked it, especially the last line of the first stanza. You really captured some strong emotions with your words. Awesome!
 
Andri55 replied...
Feb. 4 at 1:52 pm :
Thank you it was actually based on my personal story, your comment really motivated me
 
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