Pinky's Poem

January 28, 2013
By Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu


Teeth white as snow
lips red as blood
dark hazel eyes bearing
down on my rosy cheeks
making me wish I was his
I try not to look but it is hard not to stare knowing he is always there
I wish to take his hand and intertwine them with my own
just thinking of this makes me shake to my bones
So i quickly look down
he places his ice cold hand on my warm forehead
making me quiver
he quickly retracts
and I can't help but laugh
a crocked grin paints his face
leaving an everlasting mark
on my heart



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Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2013 at 11:37 am
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu

Thank you! :) 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 16 2013 at 1:26 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I agree with redhairCat: the imagery used is lovely. Woncerful work; I love the image too that you used.

on Feb. 25 2013 at 3:18 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Great imagery! So good! Keep writing!

Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2013 at 11:27 pm
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu

Thank you :)

on Feb. 15 2013 at 10:21 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
4 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
Impossible is not a word, it's just a reason for someone not to try.

wow I love this poem... It is perfectly worded


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