Snow and Skating

January 25, 2013
Skaters on the lake
Silent trees watching
Beautiful ice
Bitter cold
Hockey goals
Hanging limbs
Waving sticks
Windless branches
Speedy skates
Solid guardians

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mnm08 said...
Apr. 25, 2013 at 8:05 pm
That was simply beautiful =) ! I loved it.  
Artgirl1999 replied...
Apr. 27, 2013 at 7:23 am
Wow, I can't believe people like this so much! I didn't think it was very good, myself. Part of why I put it on here. Thanks, guys!
mollybug13 said...
Apr. 14, 2013 at 4:12 pm
I agree with HanBan12.... awesome ... love it 5/5
Artgirl1999 replied...
Apr. 14, 2013 at 9:15 pm
Thank you, guys! I appreciate it. :D
Hanban12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 8:49 pm
Awesome! Very shory yet sweet. I love how the imagery all flows togther perfectly.... ur very talented! :P
Artgirl1999 replied...
Apr. 27, 2013 at 7:20 am
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
In_Love_with_Writing said...
Feb. 8, 2013 at 10:00 pm
The first thought that came to me when reading this was exactly what the title alluded to: skating and winter. I'm not sure what exactly you were hoping to achieve with this (were you trying to describe a winter scene?), but I did like it a lot. :)
Artgirl1999 replied...
Feb. 9, 2013 at 1:03 pm
Actually, I had no idea where thus was going when I wrote it. Mostly i was just messing around with alliteration and description, and it came out like a poem, which surprised me. I'm not very good at poetry; I'm more of a prose writer. Anyway, thanks for commenting and reading!
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