Alone in a Room Full of People on a Tuesday Evening

January 25, 2013
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she stretched her hand out towards the static
hearing the whispers retreat into their hollow shells

and that was the time she decided to love herself
because she figured somebody had to

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Nicksamson said...
Jan. 28, 2013 at 1:01 pm
Nice! I liked it. but i think you need to add a few more paras so as to make it more interesing and fun to read.
AmyLeigh This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 28, 2013 at 6:54 pm
thank you! i kind of wanted this to be a shorter poem because i think i conveyed everything i wanted in the 2 stanzas i had, but i totally get what you're saying and when i'm editing i'll see if adding a few more is the way i want to go! :)
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